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This heart bleeds a sad song
The notes run though my weeping veins
At an agonizing pace,
Tormenting my ears with
Abusive lyrics of the deceased.
The notes run though my weeping veins
At an agonizing pace,
Tormenting my ears with
Abusive lyrics of the deceased.
Eik! ...'nother short one.
This one's a mess!
I suppose I should add more to it.
I probably will, later.
Scraps, anyone?
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So sad. Bring me happy SunniODDball.
In all seriousness, pretty good. Hm, it seems a bit too much.
But maybe that's just perfect?
*thinks while typing*.. It really made me feel torn and sad.
And that's what writing should do. Convey some feeling.
Or maybe I'm just tired and speaking non-sense. :~(
So sad. Bring me happy SunniODDball.
In all seriousness, pretty good. Hm, it seems a bit too much.
But maybe that's just perfect?
*thinks while typing*.. It really made me feel torn and sad.
And that's what writing should do. Convey some feeling.
Or maybe I'm just tired and speaking non-sense. :~(