literature

.one happy song

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Literature Text

This heart bleeds a sad song
The notes run though my weeping veins
At an agonizing pace,
Tormenting my ears with
Abusive lyrics of the deceased.

Eik! ...'nother short one.

This one's a mess!

I suppose I should add more to it.
I probably will, later.


Scraps, anyone?
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kristenspoon's avatar
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So sad. Bring me happy SunniODDball.

In all seriousness, pretty good. Hm, it seems a bit too much.
But maybe that's just perfect?
*thinks while typing*.. It really made me feel torn and sad.
And that's what writing should do. Convey some feeling.

Or maybe I'm just tired and speaking non-sense. :~(